Tuesday, December 20, 2016

Nine Bowls of Water Comments

Rating: 4.3

Clear water, in silvery tin dishes
dented as ping pong balls:
a lemon juice tinge of the staling light is in them;
they've a faint lid of dust.
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Robert Gray
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 June 2020

one beside each bowl, and the rags are on their bits of hooked wire. The cars continue, but few people walk here between the lunch shed..a very fine poem. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 June 2019

An intriguing poem with an unique style of narration.

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grace 09 June 2019

waht are the themes?

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Robert Gray

Robert Gray

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