Thursday, April 28, 2022

Nine Comments

Rating: 5.0

She was nine
It was her alcoholic father
Her voice smothered
And then
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Nabakishore Dash 30 April 2022

Many dangers are the friends of alcoholism.

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True. Not just alcohol, any form of nashaa, intoxicants are dangerous. to the society, to the mankind

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I have posted a reply to the comments by Dr Nehal. Where has it gone? ? ? ? ? ?

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 29 April 2022

One of the reasons why Alcohol is prohibited, it brings more harm than benefits apart from It creates enmity and hatred between people. A thoughtful poem.5*****

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No doubt. You are not in a position to understand what you are doing, when you are intoxicated. Refuse alcohol the first time, and every time.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 April 2022

Brilliantly crafted! !

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Thank You Rose Marie for the appreciation.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 April 2022

A very heart rending and moving poem in just minimal lines. Alcoholism/ addiction can turn a family into .

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There is a true incident behind this poem, Rose Marie. An alcoholic father raped his daughter for the first time, when she was just nine…continued until one day her discomfort was noticed by her teacher (Contd)

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Part 2. The teacher took her to a doctor. She was found to be pregnant. Not yet twelve years. Then the whole story broke out. Both the parents were arrested, father for rape and mother for abetting it. Real life story, Rose Marie. Such criminals! ! !

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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