Mo jibanara dina, masa, barsa
Bhasi jae, biti jae
Kie rakhe taa'ra hisaba, nikasa?
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If this reads as well as your English translation (also on PH, A Day For Myself) I give 5 stars and send to my favorites. My Odia is 'rusty'. ;) bri
A fantastic Odia poem. Loved it. Full marks dear poetess for this wonderful poem.
I am so happy to get your comments dear Queeny.We poets always need readers like you for reading and appreciating poems.
If I understood your language, Didi, I would comment here. Please tell us its theme in English.
Thank you Sayeed for showing your interest to know my poem.I am trying for a translation.
Bharati's English translation is a very fine poem; hopefully the Odia original is also, but, ALAS, I do not read, write, OR speak Odia. : ( bri