Thursday, November 18, 2010

Nightwish Comments

Rating: 4.3

Wishing for the sunset to resurrect into noon,
And clouds to vanish like cigarette smoke in air,
Our time together has left to soon,
And I want the noon to ever last and remain forever fair.
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Aditya Mudbhary
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Khaldun Atum 24 November 2010

Very creative, an idea that's drags you into reading it. Well done.

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Hans Vr 24 November 2010

I love this poem. wonderfully wrtten with lots of imagination. Good

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Chris Jibero 18 November 2010

Good.Time will never be enough for love.

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Aditya Mudbhary

Aditya Mudbhary

Patan, Nepal
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