Dreamily gazing towards the west I sit,
Watching the last remnants of defused light,
Slowly dematerialize, far off on the horizon.
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Very descriptive and engaging, the words vividly present the view and sounds of the scene. We have bats too that come out after 6 pm but they eat mostly the fruits near our house.
I must agree with Eric, below; You, being the visionary you are, have taken a seemingly routine night scene and given us a superb picture of one of natures most amazing beings. Well done Juan.