Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Nightwatch Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wait at night
for the man to come.
Tired of daylight dawning.
Eyes blinded wide
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mimi brown
COMMENTS
Bele Lele 07 August 2009

Very interesting, different than others, well written.10+

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Adi Cox 05 August 2009

This was an interesting read and the words feel like they where written with heart felt conviction. The creative use of colour gives a vibrant ending to your poem. Excellent 10/10.

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