Wednesday, August 24, 2011

Nightmares (Thought) Comments

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Anger makes you hotter,
If you were a beast,
you would have sharp nails and fur.
And as you howl in the night,
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Poet of the River
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Kevin Patrick 09 August 2012

You cannot spell slaughter, without spelling laughter. I love these lines and their deeper meaning that one is both a spectator and the actor to the events of once life. A nice early work of yours.

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Amber S 26 August 2011

i had a dream like this i like how you ended with a question you are a very good writer. -Amber

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
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