Monday, July 2, 2012

Nightmares Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lying in bed nothing but the clock ticking
Counting down before his mind starts clicking.
The tap turns on, water dripping
As slowly as a dead man living.
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Theo Williams
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 16 July 2012

nice master rhyming. so good

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Joyce Rugg 03 July 2012

This is amazing! It's dark, confessional, & extremely gripping. Nice job!

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Chyna Parker 03 July 2012

great job! I really like the way you write :)

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Theo Williams

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