Friday, February 17, 2012

Nightmares Comments

Rating: 4.0

Tossing and turning trying to sleep
getting no rest, not a peep.
Feeling restless and having dreams
of horrible things you want to scream!
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Beth Johnson
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 18 February 2012

This is very descriptive of what a nightmare is and you put it all together in an excellect way with your choice of words. The lines convey what you want the reader to experience and the poem did just that. Great write!

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Beth Johnson

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