Friday, August 19, 2016

Nightmares Comments

Rating: 5.0

The nightmares come
in a film they call dreams
the skulls are the walls
closing in tighter
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Dave Alan Walker
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Edmund Strolis 01 September 2018

Nightmares are born in the light of day. The conscious mind storing away the wicked tools to be revealed when the poor soul succumbs to slumber. The script is written in the light of day and performed on evening's darkened stage.

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Hans Vr 21 June 2018

Let the sighs of relief in the morning generate the anticipation of sweet dreams for the next night. Keep on writing, Dave. I look forward to your next poems. Let me know if you post some more.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 September 2016

Times when we feel trapped presented in a splendid allegory n metaphorical way wow! But ends on kinda a positive note of light at the end of the tunnel. Kudos. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse too.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 02 September 2016

nightmares are sometimes scary and confusing as written by Dave..well written..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 August 2016

Dreams defined in an awesome fashion. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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