Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Nightmare Of A Mom Comments

Rating: 5.0

My kid with a doll slowly twiddles
Matching to a song from piano she diddles

She taps her little feet and turns around
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Neethu Prasanna
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Patricia Grantham 13 October 2013

A lovely poem about a mother. Any thoughts of loosing her child gives one quite a scare. To see her grow up and blossom into a young lady then to lose her is quite scary. A very poignant write. Nice.

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Bharathy R 15 September 2013

Nightmare Of A Mom Superb! ! !

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Sunil Ramu 15 September 2013

I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. To the untrained eye, they are all the same. Have a nice day!

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Narmada Janaki Raman 09 February 2012

Good ones Neethu.....very expressive lines...

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