Nightmare Inner Vision Comments
Dark birds gather at my grave
Trying to unearth the remains of my defeat;
The hills bleed with disease,
No one will survive;
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this gave me goosebumps! i'ld like to have faith in people, even in a small percentage of them.. but our world is going through a tough period! great write HBH
Uriah...Very good, my friend. Mary said it all better than I can.
The flowers turning to razorblades.........wow, that's an image that will stay with me. Very dark Uriah. Very good (of course) but definately intense. Sincerely, Mary
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11/14/2025 10:23:15 PM # 1.0.0
The hills bleed with disease, no one will survive it.' What a chilling line. And, a very stirring poem.