Saturday, May 9, 2009
Nightmare Comments
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She's drowning in a pool
Of her own self hatred and heartbreak
She only finds one way out of it
Dark thoughts cloud the light in her mind
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Saadat Tahir
11 May 2009
great imagery and fantastic penning its straight forward and without the twists and knarls that we are so fond of putting in our pieces... great writting superb cheers
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7/28/2025 11:47:09 PM # 1.0.0
I rather enjoyed this poem. Your imagery and vocabulary usage was again very appealing, though for this poem, I would shift around the structure and apply some more line breaks.