Saturday, November 22, 2008

Nightmare Comments

Rating: 3.5

Rain flowing down my cheeks
hearing nothing but painful shrieks.
Dark shadows garding the exit
with nothing to do but forfeit.
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Koti Bri
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Rivers O'Donahue 20 January 2009

Great Poem... I loved the last sentence the most.... Nightmares, dreams, reality, it's all the same.

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Joseph Poewhit 22 November 2008

Captures the horror of disease

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Charmaine Sinclair 22 November 2008

I like this poem because it reflects a nightmare very well, and the strange unableness to wake up and rise from it, until it lets you go; and even then, it seems to cling like wisps.

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Koti Bri

Koti Bri

Kanass city, MO
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