Thursday, February 21, 2008

Nightmare Comments

Rating: 5.0

Scattered bodies and venom blood
feelings of hatered runs like a flood

Taking over your body and soul
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Sarah Ibrahim
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rajagopal haran 01 May 2008

soliloquy of a tortured soul..well written

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David Desantis 28 April 2008

Very powerful Sarah, deep and sad...This sounds like one nightmare I wouldn't want to be in.

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2008

All the rhymes aren't there Sarah but all you emotion and feelings are. I bet you're a real caring person. You are a caretaker of our human souls. Keep up your work. GW62

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Justin Mata 21 February 2008

Dark... just my taste. Good poem.

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