Monday, July 7, 2014

Nightmare Comments

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I dreamt that you stole all my books,
Negating all the pains I took;
The summary of all my life,
My history of love and strife;
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Valsa George 09 July 2014

Enjoyed this highly rhyming write...! . How sad the valuable treasure is treacherously stolen away through wile tricks!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 07 July 2014

Brilliant write and very engaging couplets, carrying a lot of meanings in marvelous rhythm and rhyme. The end lines are reamrkably effective.

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