Saturday, June 29, 2013

Nightmare Comments

Rating: 5.0

Identities dissolved in the liquid darkness
Mists, unidentified faces lurked
Silent screams quivered on closed lips
And a multitude of unanswered
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Yasmin Khan
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Sallam Yassin 06 July 2013

Great and is enough sufficient to move the inner world of every soul in his action and images intense

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Allemagne Roßmann 03 July 2013

when the night is a horse without a mare- it is always haunted and sleepless like those words.Well described and meaningful.

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Kevin Halls 02 July 2013

What a very descriptive poem Jasmeen. What a gift of words you have. First time I've come across your poetry, and I'll be back again!

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2013

excellent read. enjoyed much

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Wahab Abdul 02 July 2013

this is strikingly yours in different style which i like most... lovely..

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 July 2013

Wow u have paintd d nightmare scene so splendid! One of yor best in poetry. I esp admird d web weavin part.

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R.j. Wynn 01 July 2013

Some very poetic lines here. Love it

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Valerie Dohren 01 July 2013

The dream world is illusory, well described here.

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Farah Ilyas 29 June 2013

And this partially blend has a impact in abundance...bravo

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Valsa George 29 June 2013

A contrast between illusion and reality, fear and bravery, light and murkiness..... we are thus eternally lost in a world of contradictions! A great write! !

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David Wood 29 June 2013

'To sleep perchance to dream', said Shakespear, 'what dream we do have'. Lovely poem Jasmeen

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Gajanan Mishra 29 June 2013

unanswered questions in dreams, I like it, thanks.

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