Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Nightmare Comments

Rating: 4.6

A dream can keep you awake
A nightmare can get you scared
Waking up screaming
From a dream you were never meant to dream
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Mariah Simpson
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Uchenna Nnodum 22 July 2009

this is a first hand illustration from a witness.Nice work...

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Dylan Oppedahl 13 July 2009

From a dream you were never meant to dream I love that. Its so perfect for the poem.

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Marcella D 11 July 2009

this is the best poem about nightmare's in all my life

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Shekhar Joshi 03 July 2009

excellent.........almost all can relate to it...........atleast i was.......... wonderful poem......... ;)

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Eric Lopez 03 June 2009

Aye I like this poem you wrote it really neat...

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 22 May 2009

Beautiful poem! Please don't stop writing. This is a good start.

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Kesav Easwaran 22 May 2009

you present very vividly how a nightmare feels...imaginative write, Mariah...the reader would feel he or she is in the midst of a nightmare...thanks...10

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Saadat Tahir 19 May 2009

Hi Mariah graphic...strong and amazing write...just one stroke and u hit the jaxkpot...well dear thats how its in the treasure island named poetry i m impressed and enjoyed reading it write more often cheers

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Mariah Simpson

Mariah Simpson

Loveland, Colorado
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