Saturday, October 21, 2006

Nightly Storms Predicted.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

There I sat
taking in the screaming deluge
of insults
Only he can drown me with...
...
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Lee Degnan
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Nimal Dunuhinga 20 July 2007

Extraordinary! Lee storm predicts all the tragedies in its harsh language.

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Roger Bowman 07 December 2006

I agree with Doc Wilde's comment though I believe its a great write Lee Lots of love Roger

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jack russell 23 November 2006

Clever stormy metaphors...but why subject yourself to someone who obviously doesn't deserve you...Hopefully this is just your muse speaking...or, dump him! Better things await :) jack.

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Chuck Audette 06 November 2006

A powerful piece of writing. They say the pen is mightier than the sword, and I guess that is true if it is properly positioned upright between the couch cushions, where a drunken bully might sit on it... -chuck

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Nimal Dunuhinga 31 October 2006

It's a very strong and sad poem. Prevention is better than cure.

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Patrick Ladbrooke 24 October 2006

Powerful statement. Just one word seemed a little out of place the biblical 'runneth' (just a personal view) . Great poem, strong and full of feeling. Patrick

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Lee Degnan

Peekskill, NY
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