There I sat
taking in the screaming deluge
of insults
Only he can drown me with...
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I agree with Doc Wilde's comment though I believe its a great write Lee Lots of love Roger
Clever stormy metaphors...but why subject yourself to someone who obviously doesn't deserve you...Hopefully this is just your muse speaking...or, dump him! Better things await :) jack.
A powerful piece of writing. They say the pen is mightier than the sword, and I guess that is true if it is properly positioned upright between the couch cushions, where a drunken bully might sit on it... -chuck
It's a very strong and sad poem. Prevention is better than cure.
Powerful statement. Just one word seemed a little out of place the biblical 'runneth' (just a personal view) . Great poem, strong and full of feeling. Patrick
Extraordinary! Lee storm predicts all the tragedies in its harsh language.