Sunday, October 23, 2011

Nightlife Comments

Rating: 5.0

Night life slowly fades into the dawn
And the man in the west moon now sleeps
Dreams soon set themselves aside
And the reality of the day sets in
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William King Jr.
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Howard Savage 15 September 2016

Great poem with a touch of reality and true grit.

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Howard Savage 07 January 2016

Great metaphor with this poem, Great writing.

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Ramesh Rai 17 November 2014

Night slowly fades into the dawn With it our dreams and ignorance The morning light forsakes our eyes Making our existence pure bliss. Nicely penned

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Ramesh Rai 17 November 2014

Night slowly fades into the dawn With it our dreams and ignorance The morning light forsakes our eyes Making our existence pure bliss. Nicely penned

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William King Jr.

William King Jr.

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