Nightingale's Song Comments

First, Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. I think your title is perfect for this poem. As the dove flys it encircles many aspects of the emotons written within these lines. I like this very much, thank you.

Wow your good. i really like it.

a very sad song indeed...paining...yet pleasingly touching to listen to...'Misery of lover's, shall know no bounds'...good line indeed...and heart 'swimming' the hurt... a wonderful phrase to bring out the feel in full measure, Wendy...good poem 10