Thursday, September 12, 2019

Nightingale Of The Moment Comments

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The distance was less than a yard,
But my brain was a coward,
So the distance was never reduced,
One on the top that remains confused.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 September 2019

The best words I ever heard, a smile never seen earlier, Wrapped in a black skin a white heart so much dear, " The patient is now completely out of danger." The shuttle started its dance. My sister, my mother! Beautiful Poem Akhtar Sahab! A beautiful photo too........10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 September 2019

Sometimes it was brain in the garden of heart, Sometimes it was heart in deserts of the brain, Dreams! How naughty, but thanks to your naught, Shuttle! I love you and my love is a chain. we all r elements of an UNKNOWN UNSEEN BUT IMAGINARY LORD YOU MAY CALL DOD SIR U R 1

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Khalida Bano Ali 12 September 2019

A true story so nicely narrated, a touching poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 September 2019

What a touching write full of gratefulness. Bless your heart, Sir Akhtar. You make life wonderful. A great theme in a great poem. Beautifully crafted.

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Kostas Lagos 12 September 2019

Enjoyed reading your poem Akhtar!

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