Coloratura of sunset gardens.
the last soprano of sunlight
Then fingers of the dubious night
With stalking shadows crying out
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Tom. Part 1. You keep us on our mental toes, thank you for that. You never settle for mediocrity nor offer it to others. I struggled through Dante's Inferno several months ago. Then I was overcome with a huge desire to cast that man into one of those miserable levels.
Part 2. Anyway, your poem was way more effective and so much more poetic as a whole than Dante's epic and I don't have the slightest desire to fling you into any of Dante's brier patches. In fact this piece deserves a million 10's.