Wednesday, April 2, 2014

Nightfall Comments

Rating: 4.5

When night has fallen
You can feel
In that brief eternity
The heartbeat of the land
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Carol Fleming Klein
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Khairul Ahsan 02 April 2014

It's a beautiful poem, well done! 'When night has fallen You can feel In that brief eternity The heartbeat of the land' - Loved these lines, something that I can relate to. 'and then in a blink be gone.' - I wonder what exactly you might have meant by this.

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Carol Fleming Klein

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