Nightclub Comments

Unconventional and unorthodox ideas about love and beauty. Why not, 'I am so beautiful/ and you are a fool to be in love with me'. He plays the tenor sax and gives the poem unity. Tremendous.

You are so beautiful, I am bowled over is the thing of deliberation to win the praise here under this poem. The nighclub is just of dance and romance. to seek pleasure and to enjoy the motto of it; to drink and dance and win over your love. how the club men befool it others and how do the pleasure-seekers trying to extract?

This is SUCH a great poem. I think it is so interesting, so true, and I love how he writes - its like a funky kind of modern feel to his words.