Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Night Whisperer Comments

Rating: 4.3

O Night comes again,
When the golden light leaving the sky
Follow the sun, to the west hills it flies
Flying birds now return, reach home again
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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2018

It is a beautiful philosophical poem nicely executed, as in dark there's a hint to rise again, to rest from all pains, to see another side of spirit that we neglected in daylight...this come with melody of lullaby ..if we lose in dark, keep believe there's a best way to give us the best things about life. Thanks for sharing.

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John Carse 12 February 2012

Very lyrical - could almost hear music. I enjored it - thank you. Please read my new poems. Would love to hear fro you.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 11 February 2012

Of this night I will always dream. For my angel is but a whisper upon the twilight. A shining soul glimmering in the darkness to bring the strongest light. A guide for those who lost their way. A wind that brings us a new day with new hope. A foundation not yet finished, but soon it will be complete. With memories both upon the mind and heart we do keep. A sense of both sorrow, and happiness. A mixture that is but perfect and sweet. It is quite unique and all our own. It can not captured in a jar. It can not be mimicked or cloned. It is but a shooting star. Your poems are the best, and I can't wait to read your next

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Ludicrous Angel 08 February 2012

awsome dude! ! keep up the marvello work: D

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Brianna Winebarger 19 January 2012

touching and symbolic. wonderful poem.

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Wahab Abdul 06 January 2012

this is a fantastic poem..i like it...i enjoyed it very much...please read my new poem how could they dare.....?

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Eric Cockrell 05 January 2012

in the darkness of night the essence of light is born! great poem!

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Stella Mary 03 January 2012

Good night! --- Stella Mary

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James William 31 December 2011

love this poem man i really do

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Samantha Turner 30 December 2011

I fail because i am so young and easily confused trying to understand some lines, but it is a beautifully written poem ^^. Great Job!

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Andrew Blakemore 29 December 2011

Wonderful imagery, excellent poetry.

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Bernard Snyder 28 December 2011

Hello 'US', Again, this shows why I'll always be a fan of yours. I've grown accustomed to nothing but the best when it comes to your poetry. This one is truly magnificent asall of your work is. You're one of the best! ! Keep em' coming! Great job and thanks for sharing!

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Kaitlin Schmidt 28 December 2011

What a beautiful poem! I loved it so much. Great job!

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Whisperkwane Lamb 28 December 2011

an apex in sweet dreams...oooo la la...my heart sings...melody of ones on night closing in...mmmm...what is woman like you doing in a dream like this..such bliss...much promise...more, more, read to me I sleep, , , as I sleep...love the way you put me to sleep..thanks..your dXXX..good...

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Shadow Girl 27 December 2011

One word to describe so many...beautiful. Loved it -SG x

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Jacqui Broad 26 December 2011

What a beautiful poem, Soul! You are truly a great artist. After this great lullaby, good nights to you too...

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Sonali Sings 25 December 2011

A sweet lullaby for those who value their sleep..Sleep is a gift for the weary soul and minds, rejuvenates the spirits to again face the next day with a zeal as bright as the sun..For the night, moon is there to give calmness and peace with its silver light. You're a master of your art, drawing each and everyone with a magnet like charm. Nice! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 24 December 2011

'Tis a wonderful poetic depiction. Your words are gemmy and it brings a zenithal ecstacy to my soul. Euphony of this night whisperer will vanish all the worries of the day! ! 10+++++ It's a Masterpiece! ! ! Applause! ! !

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Cosmic Dreamer 23 December 2011

Your words fall softly upon parchment like the swift stroke of an artists brush upon canvas... And I drink in each verse like a starving soul lost in an empty landscape... Beautifully written... Thankyou...

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Virginia Pecho Gely 23 December 2011

Our lives are made of days and nights. Otherwise, we are blind. Keep-up writing because you inspire me a lot, Unwritten Soul. This is just a master piece. Thank you. Virginia

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