Friday, July 18, 2008

! ! ! Night When Fluffs Blue! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.8

night yet fluffs up gleaming blue
silence bewilders by the darkness
green when never blue by the light
tear may fall onto the dream of room
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Dr subhendu kar
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I feel a sense of longing here, but then, I am so sentimental, or perhaps too sensitive to the feelings that hide in between the words we write as poets...I love the passion you express throughout....

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Resplendent imagework, Doctor...Your verse-scaping, can be likened to the majesty of the floral-scape at the famed Botanical Gardens, in New York ! ~ FjR ~

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Rema Prasanna 18 July 2008

a shadow of dark night, a fusion of colors blue not green, a blend of life's various shades... liked this one... amazing visuals... good 10 Rema

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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