As the deep youth of night avowes
by the sultry dream of the betiding sea
the ripples of wild stream rip through the awe
free and fancied thought over powers apprehension
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phrases are astonishing indeed.....fine poem....eloquent.....10++
Vivid phrases, but hard to follow from thought to thought. Good verse.
Hi I am gretly inspired by this beautiful write of yours.You are indeed a great writer!
Hello my friend...That was a poem that makes you think...very very good and deep...I agree this is a +10! ! Keep up the good work! !
frigid wall-murky meadow-sizzling mist nice phrases. thanks for sharing +10 as usual this goes to my fav list. regards anjali
wonderful! keep writing! I like the words, smiles full moon inspires inkling the sea.could you read and comment on my poems too? Thank you.
Another fantastic piece! ! ! keep inspiring!