Friday, July 13, 2012

Night Vision Over A Living Planet Comments

Rating: 5.0

The air is heavy,
Hard and sharp,
Because of the interplanetary forces.
A rolling stone rain is falling,
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Rajendran Muthiah 11 August 2012

When earthquakes, tremors and volcanic eruptions make the people flee, survival is rare. Beautiful ideas of Physics amaze the readers.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 23 July 2012

As VP has written here, some lines are too scary. Still thrilling...

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Vipins Puthooran 23 July 2012

the waters of darkness! ! ! ! ! I like this one! ! ! You've written this poem so beautifully but some lines made me frightened! ! ! ! Really an excellent poem! ! !

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Excellent penning, Mari...I decided to leave PF and return to PH after almost a 3 year absence...I'm told that the tech issues that caused me to leave in '09 are no longer a major problem, so I guess i'll have to just see for myself. When u get a chance pop onto my jacket & see if my pen is still up to snuff! Have a great weekend, missy! ~FjR~

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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