Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Night Train Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sleep. Close eyes. Don’t think. Close eyes. Count perhaps.
Count seconds. Count the rattle of wheels on tracks.
Sleep. Eyes closed. Night come to close. Thoughts collapse.
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Ijanric Howe
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Catrina Heart 02 August 2009

Such a lovely poem written with fine rhyme and diction...nice alliteration and assonance of words also...well done! ! !

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Obinna Eruchie 31 July 2009

A deep experience in 'Night Train'.

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