Tuesday, June 6, 2017

Night-Time Walking Comments

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Houselights hue domestic bliss.
Curtains drawn, some still apart.
A distant engine gently purrs.
Night-time fodder for the heart.
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Joe Hughes
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Susan Williams 08 June 2017

There are so many well-written images in this piece of art that I cannot pick out the best although if really really pressed I would have to go for this: Night-time walks on empty roadways. OR A single night bird flurries home. OR Night-time fodder for the heart OR A darting cat sneaks slyly by. Hidden now by well parked cars.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Okay, I could go on but you get the gist- -this is handsome writing going on in England

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Susan Williams 08 June 2017

Ooooops, Ireland. Not England. I turned left when I should have turned right- -that's my excuse and I'm sticking to it!

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Joe Hughes 08 June 2017

Thank you Susan for your very thoughtful comments. A very creative space is night time. Regards

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Fiona Beetham 06 June 2017

Wonderful imagery as I walked through your poem.84142

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Joe Hughes 08 June 2017

Thank you Fiona. Regards

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