Thursday, July 20, 2006

Night Terror Comments

Rating: 2.8

Running scared
Through deserted countryside
Hiding beneath the trees, breath in ragged gasps -
In the dark heavens overhead, tiny 'stars'
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Linda Ori
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Barry Van Allen 17 March 2007

Linda, Please, take all of your knives and such and lock them away before you go to bed! B.V.A.

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Nalini Hebbar 20 July 2006

i did look out of the window looking to see where the screams were from...forgot about the antenne...so that was you screaming! ! ! ...i was just finishing lunch...dont scream in your daydreamings...that would be midnight for me! ! ! ...lol...love...nalini

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WELL LINDA, YOU HAVE MOST CETAINLY BEEN THE EARNEST POETESS THIS EVENING, GRACING US WITH A POTPOURI OF VERSE RANGING FROM HAIKU TO DARKVERSE TO A STRINGLINE OF CONTEMPORARY AMERICAN POETRY.THIS, AS ALL THE OTHER WORKS YOU HAVE PENNED THIS EVENING HAS MADE FOR MOST PLEASUREABLE READING...NO CRITIQUE ON THIS ONE....JUST PERFECT''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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Ray Forever 20 July 2006

Your vivid descriptions gave me a day nightmare: -)

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