Friday, June 24, 2022

Night Succumbs Comments

Rating: 5.0

Daylight rushes
for eternity,
and to his wishes….
night succumbs
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Thank You, Becca and Fatemeh, for sharing your appreciation of the poem. Feels great to read you.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 June 2022

Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 26 June 2022

Such beautiful imagery and feeling to this! .. Sets the mind to dream and drift! ..

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fatemeh zolfagharian 25 June 2022

Reading this poem portrayed the temptation of the moon shining in front of my eyes.

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Thank You, Miss Grace for sharing the comments on the poem. Happy that you liked the poem. And thank you for the 5*s too. Obliged.

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Miss Grace 25 June 2022

Indeed very poetic

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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