You lay there in your thoughts,
That unwelcome intrusion
Like the tinnitus, that gift
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Slowly, surely and gently like melting snowflakes, the poem erases all unwelcome intrusions.
Gently gently the poem takes over the mind. Full *************
Omg how did you read my mind? That's exactly my state of mind. Very very nice poem..compliments.
Beautiful poem with crystalline imagery. Wonderful poetic expressions. Yes, we are in the same boat, having the same night song. A poetic gem. Top Marks! ! ! !