Wednesday, December 1, 2021

Night Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

You lay there in your thoughts,
That unwelcome intrusion

Like the tinnitus, that gift
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 December 2021

Beautiful poem with crystalline imagery. Wonderful poetic expressions. Yes, we are in the same boat, having the same night song. A poetic gem. Top Marks! ! ! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 December 2021

The night song is beautiful.......10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 December 2021

Slowly, surely and gently like melting snowflakes, the poem erases all unwelcome intrusions.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 02 December 2021

Gently gently the poem takes over the mind. Full *************

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 December 2021

Comforting words that made me shed tears Bravo!

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 December 2021

Omg how did you read my mind? That's exactly my state of mind. Very very nice poem..compliments.

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