Thursday, December 9, 2004

Night Soil Comments

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When I am lonely
for human company
I pull myself up by the bootstraps,
- sometimes the suspenders -
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 09 December 2004

Allan, Confidentially, some of mine are long (not as long as the lingua longa you desribed inthe technicolour department) because I can't find my ending and keep going until it rears up. Thanks for the kind comments. H

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Allan James Saywell 09 December 2004

Herbert you love a long poem, but your good at the long poem, so keep doing long poem's, woman of the night a good subject, i couldn't right about that subject you did and it was excellant, when i saw the title i thought you were going to do a bit of night gardening, but you explained yourself regard's allan

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Kelly Allen Vinal 09 December 2004

Another excellent example of free verse at its best

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