Wednesday, December 12, 2007

Night Sky Comments

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The night dawned on
The horizon slowly
Enveloping everything
With darkness,
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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL
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Wennie C 12 December 2007

Beautiful description from dawn to dusk. But a little spelling error in the poem. Overall its pretty amazing.

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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

Trissur, Kerala State, India.
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