Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Night-Silence Comments

Rating: 3.6

The patient stars are shining large and clear;
The crescent moon hangs like a tilted bowl;
So calm, so still, that I can almost hear
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Arthur Bayldon
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Mahtab Bangalee 22 March 2020

night silence So calm, so still, that I can almost hear/// beautiful expression

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Savita Tyagi 22 March 2020

So beautiful. The magic and calm effect of night rings out so gloriously.

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Alison mujati 22 March 2020

Wow, this absolutely makes me want to write

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 March 2020

The crescent moon hangs like a tilted bowl; beautiful expression. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 March 2020

Very nice poem on the beautiful night. Loved it.

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A good poem and enjoyed

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2020

Thoughts stirring in the chambers of my soul...... impressive inscription. Beautiful poem.

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Rajnish Manga 22 March 2020

Perfect setting for a 'calm.... still.... chambers of my soul'. Thanks a lot.

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Ruta Mohapatra 22 March 2020

How wonderfully described! A great poem of the day!

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Khairul Ahsan 22 March 2019

The poets ability to remain strictly frugal and simple on the use of words is remarkable. 'The crescent moon hangs like a tilted bowl' - an excellent imagery! This short poem gets a 10/10 from me.

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Susan Williams 22 March 2019

I am jealous Beautiful flow of imagery

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Derick Roberts 22 March 2019

As a teen poet myself .,I truly adore the details,..the chamber of soul....part.,.drove me calm

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M Asim Nehal 22 March 2019

Great imagery in four wonderful lines, Liked it.10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2019

So calm! ! ! So beautiful. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Castellenas John 22 March 2019

No waste of words. A amazing poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 March 2019

Mind blowing narration of the silence of highest order and it's equally mind blowing spell on the human beings and their souls. Great classic.

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Ruta Mohapatra 22 March 2019

A real classic! Thanks for sharing!

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Julia Luber 22 March 2019

simple and evocative, romantic but personal

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 March 2019

depth of everything is lightened but from from far it looks like dark (night) because of its silence!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 March 2019

A fine poem by Arthur Bayldon...........

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Arthur Bayldon

Arthur Bayldon

Leeds, England
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