Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Night Shade Comments

Rating: 3.7

Drift through the forest like the breeze through the branches.
In the shade of these grand trees the sun is a mere glimmer.
Walk on my friend but caution,
the bush holds not only beauty but also danger.
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Angelic Warrior
COMMENTS

powerful poem. good poetry milady

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

An awesome, evocative write

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Wesley Mincin 30 August 2009

Very good. I wish I could verbally express the appreciation I have for passion poured into poetry. But know that I enjoyed the poem very much.

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Chris Newlash 27 June 2009

VERY poetic.. great job!

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Unexpectedly, a fire begins to burn. Like a match to tinder, you are overcome. The inferno chokes you- lay silent and still....... lovely write i admire it.... beautiful... read mine rage... send message to poet i. e. me

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Fiona Davidson 26 May 2009

Except nightshade or belladonna usually has purple flowers, fantastic write AW...your imagery is fantastic...10+++

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