Friday, October 30, 2015

Night People Comments

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Light shines on roofs made silver by the rain
Turned dazzling golden mirrors by the sun
As tiles some ancient armourer had begun
To fashion from a hard metallic plate,
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James Smith
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James Smith 04 June 2017

Thanks for your comments always helpful

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2017

As ever unprepared for day's full light Cowering from brightness hiding in shade We reveal ourselves as things of night. light, shade, darkness, human beings who seek and love to be in darkness and shade.......... all these points u brought into this poem....... darkness is only the absence of light.... tony

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Simone Inez Harriman 30 October 2015

Beautifully penned Harrison. I enjoyed your poem :)

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Liza Sudina 30 October 2015

sometimes I like darkness too. it calms, hides. Nice poem!

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