Sunday, June 27, 2021

Night Of The Redbird Comments

Rating: 4.5

Cardinals sang on the snowy branches,
So scarlet against the dark black night,
As the trees performed ghostly dances,
When the red planet Mars was in sight.
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Chinedu Dike 29 June 2021

A beautiful creation in verse with rhythmic splendour. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem of yours, Madam. Remain enriched...

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 29 June 2021

BEAUTIFUL; WHAT THE IMAGERY YOU HAVE CRAFTED THAT'S EXCELLENT

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 June 2021

Beautifully crafted and well executed write. The recurring lines in this poem add beauty to this marvelous write. Top Marks

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 June 2021

Beautifully written. Loved reading this poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 June 2021

Your poem about Nature and the red birds Cardinals Song is amazingly created, the rhyming lines change each other's places in a new stanza and the next stanza all over again, truly a lovely discovery, I like that very much.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 June 2021

Beautifully penned Bravo!

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Lasaad Tayeb 28 June 2021

Greatly penned prose, as always Evelyn, the nature vibrates in every verse. I enjoyed reading it. Blessings and kindest regards

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Varsha M 27 June 2021

Evelyn your nature's portrayal so beautiful. And i liked the red bird. And the cardinal song.

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