Saturday, October 22, 2016

Night Of Gentle Breeze Comments

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'Oh! night of gentle breeze
gliding along the line of trees
why do I always think of you
that even in my bed
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Jesus Diaz Llorico 23 October 2016

Thank you for a very nice comment Ms Bharati Nayak, really appreciate this...

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Bharati Nayak 23 October 2016

Contrasting images of night and day- - -dream and reality- - have been expressed nicely.Gentle night breeze takes you on a dreamy ride to a distant place, but the morning light wakes you up to the reality.A beautiful write, thanks for shharing.

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