Monday, September 3, 2018

Night, North Woods Deer Camp Comments

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Darkness seeps through stately pines,
outside this home-made, tar-paper shack.
It's two AM, and I cannot sleep again,
so I gaze out into the black.
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David Welch
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Susan Williams 03 September 2018

I just finished a humorous poem by you and came upon this one so I thought I'd see what else you had in your war-chest.. Glad I did. This is a show-stopper! [Okay I will admit that after reading your yodeler poem that I was expecting you to say the deep were in the deer stands the next day, rifle in hands...er... hooves ]. I am stopping by again to see what more you've got! ! ! ! !

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David Welch 04 September 2018

Glad you liked it. I do like to mix it up, though Deer in a Deer stand is quite an idea...

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John Beaton 03 September 2018

Another excellent read, David. It expresses the eeriness of night in the forest and the legacy of fear and superstition we carry from our forebears and our childhood. I like how, looking back at the end, you smile about it now.

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