Night, Nights Sleepless Comments

I loved this poem! It depicts perfectly the disappointment a man faces.

Simply divine writing Asif. The structure and flow of the poem is commendable. Alas, the last stanza completes the melancholy mood 'there was just a hope, on a peck of straw, also it burnt now ashes doth lies'. 10 Karin Anderson

A lovely poem. U get 10++.........

Sleepless night...........in Asif's Romance Villas.Beautiful works!

'sleep comes in disguise' 'lend some happiness' Lines that are so power packed that touch the interiors of heart. Terrrific

waking or asleep Oh Asif tell me-- how must death be deem things more true and deep than this mere mortal dream or how would thy notes flow in such a crystal stream a powerful write ++++10 anjali

Beautiful, very well crafted. I'd like to read more of your work. Kind Regards