Tuesday, January 1, 2019

Night Life (Choka) - Choka Poetry Comments

Rating: 5.0

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when it sees night playing foul
his silence is dead
as the moon reflects
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 August 2021

A very pleasant read. Read with great pleasure!

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Michael Jack 12 July 2020

Interesting Choka, first time read it.

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M Asim Nehal 26 February 2019

THANKS TO ALL..........................

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Zuzu Mutairi 25 January 2019

Pleased with this poem, Asim Nehal

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M Asim Nehal 01 February 2019

Thank u so much Zydofin.

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Gordon Walter 15 January 2019

Night life well explored. thanks for sharing this one.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Thx Much Gordon, .

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S H 05 January 2019

The best part of it is still hidden and unseen. I liked what u wrote on nightlife.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Thx Much my critic friend. .

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2019

Unspoken words! ! . Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Thx Much my friend E Kofi Louis

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2019

Thx Much my friend EKL.....

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T Rajan Evol 04 January 2019

Creative nightlife nicely portrayed.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Thank much T R E, . .

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Darren Jkoeryo 04 January 2019

Brilliant Choka.. Owl, the nightwatcher to the petals, the fragrance bearer what a wonderful poem you created within the limitation of syllables 5755775577

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Thank u so much indeed it was difficult to maintain the format.

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Me Poet yeps poet 01 January 2019

NIGHT LIFE IS MYSTERY YOU POET ME POET AND LIFE IS POET TREE.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Thanks much Me Poet.....Yeps

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