Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Night Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shadow lingers in the hall
as voices echos through the windy night
gloom of death soon approaches
our bodies shivered in fright.
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Giselle Joseph
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Obinna Eruchie 05 June 2009

vivid with such creepy details of the night. nicely done.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 27 May 2009

very poignant, sorrow when heaves to death, quite painful while parting to finale, style is ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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