Wednesday, January 31, 2007

Night Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds cross over a hazy moon
Too late to hide, the time is soon
Anticipation makes my body shake
Have I made a fatal mistake?
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I M Swan
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Deanna More 07 February 2007

. Patti, you are a Traditionalist Poet (with your superb rhythm + rhyme) and a very gifted lady. This poem is outstanding in... imagery. Deanna xx .

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