Wednesday, October 22, 2008

*night, I Wait...... Comments

Rating: 2.9

It seems like forever, since the last time, I've heard your voice.
My heart is slowin down, Losing its beat, maybe even the sound.
I think of how we used to talk.. & all the other memories,
Its what's keeping me going right now.
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Dislocated Heart
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Mikayla Carpenter 29 June 2009

This poem is really beautiful. I loved reading it.! One of the best I've read today.

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Fay Slimm 09 April 2009

Another loe poem which grabs at my own heart - - have been there, done that - - oh so meaningful so a big thank you for the fine verse......10 from Fay...xx

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Katrina Pilon 08 January 2009

i love this poem its so sweet aww its so cute keep on writing

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Katrina Pilon 08 January 2009

i love this poem its so sweet aww its so cute keep on writing

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