Night (Haiku) Comments
From my debut book "Fleeting Moments: haiku on nature"
the silvery moon
reflects on a placid lake
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nice image, bipasha. this works as poem. if you'd want to be technically truer to haiku, however, consider changing the order—as the phrase that sets the poem in a season comes in the first line—so chorus of crickets (a good phrase!) would come first. -glen
Thank you. I knew that a seasonal word must be present in a haiku, but was not aware that seasonal reference must come in the first line.
Beautiful Haiku........... I think that you are a cricket lover!
Incredible Haiku. Lovely visualization. Very well done Bipasha!
Nice imagery drawn by so few words. Silvery moon, placid lake and a chorus of crickets- all combine together to make this an excellent haiku. Well done, Bipasha!
Beautiful haiku. Well thought out and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Bipasha.
Thank you so much Chinedu for such a lovely remark. It means a lot to me..
Thank you so much for such a lovely remark Akhtarji. It means a lot to me..
I just feel the beauty of silvery moon through this sweet little poem! Dear Bipasha, your short poems are so lovely and beautiful! For this poem.....10
Quiet lake in contrast with the singing crickets.Beautiful poem!
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There were days that we were traveling at night and we have seen this wonderful scenery. One of the most fascinating scene I have ever seen at nighttime. Beautifully crafted haiku as always, Bipasha.