Friday, November 28, 2008

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He did and it was heavenly,
but then she said she had to pee,
retreat he yelled, the felon heard,
and to the dunny went the bird.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Fiona Davidson 28 November 2008

Hmmmm not sure if this is a serious one or not...sorry don't mean to offend but it does seem comical in places...but it did make me smile....

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