Monday, September 12, 2011

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Thy am Darkness. Thy am Shadow.
Thy am the Ruler of the Night.
Thy, alone, stand between mankind and those who would see mankind destroyed.
Thy am the Guardian.
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Masaomi Tezuka
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Adeline Foster 17 May 2016

This was an interesting poem. Could the reference to 'Thy' be a misunderstanding of the English word 'You'? If so you must use the article 'Are' with it. Example: 'You are'. Otherwise the intent of the poem is amusing. Adeline

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